[ SECRET POST #2944 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2944 ⌋

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Comments

Re: What are you working on?

[sarillia]

I'm working on revising the last novel I wrote for NaNo. I attempted a brief summary a while back:

"Chiara lives in a world where people gain magical gifts as they age that correspond to the sort of person they are growing to be. Many of the people in her city have the gift of creating protective barriers, including her brother. They are given the title of Sentinel and used to constantly maintain a magical wall that cuts the city off from the outside world and its many dangers. It is a difficult job and one that makes some people uneasy about the stress put on the Sentinels and about the way the city ensures a steady supply of new Sentinels. This unease turns into a full-blown protest when a young Sentinel named Alba dies.

Chiara's gift is speaking to the dead. Alba finds her and reveals that she isn't happy with the way her death is being used. She disagrees with the protest and doesn't want to be a martyr. Chiara agrees to talk to the protesters for her while deciding where she stands on the issue that has begun to divide her family as well as the city as a whole."

I've got some other stories that are in the planning stage but mostly I'm trying to pin down all the problems with this first draft and how to fix them.

Re: What are you working on?

[nanslice]

OH WOW. That sounds really fascinating. I love that Alba doesn't fall in line with the protests while Chiara doesn't know how she feels about them. That's awesome. Good luck!