[ SECRET POST #3051 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3051 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I started out strongly disliking the sequel novel, then it slowly grew on me, then I was really into it for a bit, and then it lost me near the end. Some bits were really great - Hiante in Fleeting was probably my favourite part - but a lot of it just seemed pretty average.

I might like it more on a re-read, but the ending of Permanence fell pretty flat for me.

[(Anonymous)]

I don't want to say it because the creator a real person that I actually talked to a few time on tumblr (just some ask) but I think it's because the writing is not that good. She's good at short stories but I think she's not that good at writing long ones. So many things was happening in Fleeting but I didn't feel anything, accept maybe the part with Hiante and Richard's ghost. The characterization was the worst, so many people praised Astra but she's just plain and forgettable for me, and I can't tell the two girls in the novel apart. I stopped reading at about half way of Permanence, does she ever address the Erio and Snowe thing? I read some spoilers that they kiss.

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I don't know if I'd particularly pick on the writing, but a lot of the new characters introduced didn't really interest me - most of the parts I can still remember clearly now involve Hiante, probably for that reason.
There was definitely a lot of interesting stuff in them, but a lot of the details I wanted more info about were brushed over really quickly. The whole relationship between the Original King and Snowe was fascinating, I wanted more of that! Plus more Relenia pls.

Honestly I can't remember what happened with Erio and Snowe, I wasn't really interested in that part and it was pretty forgettable. I think it's implied they get together, I don't think there was any kissing but there was a lot of snuggling.