[ SECRET POST #3058 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3058 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Ughhhhh

[(Anonymous)]

There's a difference between calling the content creepy, and calling the author creepy, and given the way you phrased this:

"...and you're ~feelings are hurt~ because someone calls you creepy... Grow the fuck up, and maybe think a little bit about why people are finding it creepy."

I'm not qutie sure which direction you chose in your critique. As others have said, pointing out that the content may come across as disturbing to the audience is a perfectly valid criticism. Judging/misjudging the audience's reaction is an important aspect for any writer to learn.

When "someone calls you creepy" then that's another matter altogether.

You critique the work, not the person. If your teacher has found it necessary to comment on the way you framed your critique, then chances are it's because you crossed that line.

Re: Ughhhhh

[(Anonymous)]

To clarify, I did critique the work, and I never called the person creepy.

My professor was the one who brought up the feelings being hurt, but I promise, I never referred to the author in my critique.