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fandomsecrets2015-05-19 06:34 pm
case) wrote in fandomsecrets2015-05-19 06:34 pm
[ SECRET POST #3058 ]
⌈ Secret Post #3058 ⌋
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Re: Ughhhhh
(Anonymous) 2015-05-20 03:12 am (UTC)(link)Critique is for the structure and technical merit of the writing, not for your own personal opinions about the subject matter. You think the twenty-two year old is too perfect and flawless and thus comes off as flat? That's legit critique because it addresses a technical issue with the writing - that the character is not well-developed or fleshed out. You think it's creepy for a twenty-two year old and a fifty year old to get married? That's personal opinion and has no bearing on the writing itself.
I dislike sci-fi as a genre. I find most of the tropes that crop up in it to be boring. But that's MY opinion and does not mean that a sci-fi story is bad, just that it isn't to my personal tastes. Being objectively bad and being subjectively bad are two very different things.
Re: Ughhhhh