[ SECRET POST #3154 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3154 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Popular fanfics you hate

[feotakahari]

I enjoyed it enough to read it all the way through, but I feel like George Weasley and the Computational Error wastes a lot of its potential by rushing constantly. There's this one scene where a character who's about to abandon his old life speaks to the woman he might have married, and it's supposed to be a major turning point for him, and they barely even talk before the author ends the scene and does something else.

There's also this really popular My Little Pony fic where Applejack becomes a werewolf (I forget the title.) It's pretty funny, but the grammar is terrible and the phrasing is all over the place, and it gets more and more convoluted the farther it goes. It actually became difficult for me to understand because the words simply weren't in an order that made sense.

One more MLP fic for luck: Think Pink; or How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love Pinkie. Twilight tries to read Pinkie's mind and accidentally writes over her own personality, becoming a Twilight-Pinkie mix with the latter's playfulness and the former's neuroses and tendency towards extreme solutions. Pinkie realizes she's much happier as Twilight-Pinkie than as Twilight and convinces her not to change back. Then Twilight-Pinkie realizes how unhappy everyone around her is, and she starts the world's pinkest apocalypse. I think a lot of people upvoted for the premise rather than the dull-as-dishwater writing.