[ SECRET POST #3167 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3167 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 02 pages, 040 secrets from Secret Submission Post #453.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
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Comments

Re: What questions do you have?

[(Anonymous)]

Unfortunately, very few people have the necessary skills to be a good beta. Your friend is probably being honest that he can't see any problems, but-- and I mean no offense because it's statistically impossible-- that's more down to the fact that he's unable to recognize the flaws, not because your writing is flawless. Not everyone has that ability to read a passage and think, "Hmmm, this has really good bones but I need more on why Character X did ______ and why Character Y reacted this way", or "This chapter is missing a scene that shows the reader [stuff we need to know for later plot point A instead of too much detail about [less important info about sub plot B]".