[ SECRET POST #3209 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3209 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 03 pages, 054 secrets from Secret Submission Post #459.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
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Comments

[quantumreality]

There's actually a rather hefty Harry Potter fanfic in which my biggest technical gripe is that for 30+ chapters the author uses this mechanic.

"Person A speaking." Person B does something.

"Person B speaking." Person A or C does something.

On and on and ON. Mentally adjusting for that tends to make re-reading it a bit of a slog, so I only re-read it about once every three years or so.

[iambecomebees]

YES IT'S THE WOOORRRSSSTTTTTT and that's exactly what I mean. Dialog is in separate paragraphs for a reason, so one should conclude the accompanying action (which is actually a dialog not-tag) is also separated the same way! But noooooo. I would absolutely love to give a seminar on the technicalities of paragraph breaks.