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⌈ Secret Post #3230 ⌋

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Re: Fanfic-writing discussion thread!

[(Anonymous)]

I'm struggling with an action scene right now. I have the general idea of how I want to do it, but the pov character makes it pretty hard to write it well and I can't change the pov character.

Re: Fanfic-writing discussion thread!

[(Anonymous)]

My advice, regardless of pov: short, simple sentences. It creates the sensation that everything is happening really fast. And when something action-y happens, your attention tends to focus on the bare minimum of what's happening, so it's not going to be ooc.

Re: Fanfic-writing discussion thread!

[(Anonymous)]

That's what I usually do. I also try to keep those scenes short and keep details to a minimum, because the pov character rarely has the time to notice much.

My current problem it's that something important happens in the middle, but I don't want to do a info dump by the end of the scene, so I'm trying to find an organic way to fit it.