[ SECRET POST #3247 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3247 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Writing tips

[ketita]

You could try to turn the shift itself into a comedic moment. Setting up Super Seriousness and then shattering it with comedy can work great, especially if you play on the audience's expectations.

Or, if you don't want to go that route, you can try to lighten up your first section. See what parts can be treated in a more humorous way, or maybe outright cut. You don't always need a lot of setup/exposition.