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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2016-02-15 06:42 pm

[ SECRET POST #3330 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3330 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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[Uchuu Kyoudai (Space Brothers)]


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[Roald Dahl]


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[X-Files, "Mulder and Scully Meet the Were-Monster"]


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[Agnus Dei/Les Innocentes]


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[Whitechapel, DC Emerson Kent]


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[Undertale]


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(Tales from the Borderlands)


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[Steven Universe]


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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 02 pages, 043 secrets from Secret Submission Post #476.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.
belladonna_took: richard armitage (Default)

Re: Writing advice needed!

[personal profile] belladonna_took 2016-02-16 05:27 am (UTC)(link)
Most narrative plots tend to have some sort of complication that the characters need to overcome in order to reach the resolution. If it's part of a series you sometimes have a minor one and then a major one. The minor one would be preventing the theft of the Philosopher's Stone, and the major would be defeating Lord No-Nose - which only happens before the final conclusion.

This is a really basic structure model.



I don't really think I can offer any other advice without knowing the plot, sorry!