[ SECRET POST #3371 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3371 ⌋

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Comments

Re: How do I NOT Write a Mary-Sue?

[dancingmouse]

What I try to do is balance out a flaw with a "sue" trait. She may be very beautiful, but she's not good at socializing. Things like that. Sometimes I even use the Litmus test to get a rough idea about what's a "sue" trait and what's not.

No matter what, SOMEONE will scream "Mary-Sue!" Just ignore them. If you're character is interesting, has a few legit flaws and people like her, then keep doing what your doing.

Re: How do I NOT Write a Mary-Sue?

[(Anonymous)]

But remember they've got to be genuinely bad at that trait. It cannot be the cool internet version or you get the Quirky Agent from NCIS who has a bunch of "negative" traits to balance out her brilliant brain and easy acceptance which make her cute and quirky and a rare canon sue.