[ SECRET POST #3420 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3420 ⌋

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Comments

Re: a little help with words please?

[bigpaw]

First of all, this is super cute and I love it! I'm wondering what your native language is? Some of the lines don't quite fir the rhythm of the original English, but they sound good and maybe they fit with your language. I really like it so far!

The only line that's a little off for me is "congeal this field," because I wouldn't really use congeal to describe ice forming/freezing. It's kind of a gross-sounding word that I associate more with like, meat fat congealing on the pan or something. Not sure what a better alternative would be, though.

But keep going! It's mad cute so far and fun :)