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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2016-07-09 03:40 pm

[ SECRET POST #3475 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3475 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 03 pages, 52 secrets from Secret Submission Post #497.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 1 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
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Re: Star Wars Spoiler

(Anonymous) 2016-07-09 11:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Jesus, but that is some unreadable prose. Shitty present tense again, and very unclear on perspective because of it.

Re: Star Wars Spoiler

(Anonymous) 2016-07-09 11:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah. I'm hoping that it reads a little better in context but even what's there is too on-the-nose for me.
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Re: Star Wars Spoiler

[personal profile] shortysc22 2016-07-10 12:25 am (UTC)(link)
I'm disappointed with Aftermath for the same reason. Bloodline and Lost Stars were at least decent books, but the Legends books were generally better than the stuff they've had come out lately.