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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2016-07-18 07:25 pm

[ SECRET POST #3484 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3484 ⌋

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A little lengthy

[personal profile] feotakahari 2016-07-19 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
A baron's daughter with strong healing magic, kidnapped by a mad scientist who wanted to use her magic in his experiments. By combining her DNA with that of a dragon and several magical animals, he successfully converted her healing magic to powerful reality-warping magic known only in legends. However, no mortal vessel is strong enough to cast that magic outward, so the only way she could use it was inwards, temporarily transforming herself into any of the beings she shared DNA with.

The other MCs defeated the mad scientist and rescued her, but she now had white skin and red eyes, and the spidersilk jumpsuit she'd been made to wear for the experiment was permanently fused to her skin. Her family cast her out rather than accept the shame of a member who'd been marked by strange magic, so she traveled with the MCs, putting her new powers to use in battle. She had a lot of angst over potentially losing her mind and becoming just a beast, but she was otherwise the friendly and outgoing moral center who kept the group together.

Every other MC fell in love with her. Also, the black dragon who led the villains was motivated by the murder of the white dragon she shared DNA with, so he was drawn to/appalled by her, too.

I still think I could salvage this character if I toned her down a bit. There are opportunities to puncture her perfect image a bit, like the logistics of going to the bathroom when you can only disrobe by turning into an animal, or the problem with fighting magic-users when your clothing magnifies all magic cast on you.