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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2016-08-10 06:37 pm

[ SECRET POST #3507 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3507 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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[Buffy the Vampire Slayer]


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[Star Trek: The Next Generation]


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[Shameless (US Version)]


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[Breaking Bad]


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[Movie: Mr. Right]


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[Sherlock Holmes]


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[Jacob Frye/Maxwell Roth, Assassin's Creed Syndicate]


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[Gravity Rush]











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[personal profile] crossy_woad 2016-08-10 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved the first one, but the relationship angle felt very cringeworthy to me. :/

(Anonymous) 2016-08-10 11:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Same. I think it's the fact that she's FIFTEEN when she meets Holmes, who later becomes her husband. Ick.
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[personal profile] crossy_woad 2016-08-10 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
It never felt organic to me. I mean, the author is clearly a skilled writer. All the characters are interesting, the plots, the writing, etc. But the story never developed the feelings between the characters enough to make me believe it and not feel creeped out by the suddenness, age gap, etc. A lot of people felt that way, so we're not the only ones!

I wish they had just stayed friends, mentor/student sort of thing. I liked that. Or, if it had to be romance, really drag it out over several stories in a slow burn so it feels like it's actually from the characters, not just slapped onto the story.

(Anonymous) 2016-08-10 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, that's a good way to put it. I just never believed the relationship. Frankly, it's creepy to have a 15 year old heroine meet a 50-something man and have their apprentice/mentor relationship turn into romance, and King doesn't do a very credible job of it. Their married life looks exactly like a platonic partnership except for a few obligatory mentions of sexytimes that again, don't feel very natural or believable. It's as if the author herself suddenly remembered that oh yeah, they're supposedly a married couple who are in love and attracted to one another! Better mention they had sex.

(Anonymous) 2016-08-11 08:29 am (UTC)(link)
Excuse me, 15? Holmes would never!

(Anonymous) 2016-08-11 12:19 pm (UTC)(link)
He would never.

On her twenty-first birthday, when she becomes legally of age, she introduces the concept of bringing in a sexual element, and he FREAKS.

(Anonymous) 2016-08-11 12:54 pm (UTC)(link)
What kind of bad-fic nonsense is this?

OK, so I did a quick check on Goodreads. We're talking about The Beekeeper's Apprentice + sequels, yes? LOL, a 4.08 rating for a synopsis that sounds like straight-up garbage.
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[personal profile] crossy_woad 2016-08-12 10:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Most of the other elements are quite well done. But if I'd known, I'd never have started the series. (I read about six of hte stories before finally walking away; there are some merits, if you can ignore the flaws. If.)