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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2016-08-11 06:52 pm

[ SECRET POST #3508 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3508 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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[Pokémon Adventures]


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[The West Wing]


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[Star Trek: The Next Generation]


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[Ian McKellen/Cate Blanchett]











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Re: petty gripes and complaints

[personal profile] fishnchips 2016-08-12 07:20 am (UTC)(link)
I just read a fic that - besides being wildly OOC from start to finish- also had one of the hugest disconnects between show and tell I've ever seen. You really noticed that the author wanted the reader to perceive the characters in a very certain way (especially where it came to who was in the right and who in the wrong) but the way the characters were written and the way they behaved gave a completely contrary impression. If this had been done intentionally, it would have been a really great example of an unreliable narrator but it definitely wasn't intentional.