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fandomsecrets2016-10-20 06:41 pm
[ SECRET POST #3578 ]
⌈ Secret Post #3578 ⌋
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Honestly the best test for this sort of thing is a critique by someone you can trust to be honest to you. Because tests like this tend to be hard and fast about a lot of things that require more context to figure out are doing it right nor not.
For example you can't really say that an OC being related to canon characters can't be good writing in any way. You have to look at how the author does it, and how they use or abuse it.