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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2016-10-24 06:11 pm

[ SECRET POST #3582 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3582 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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[Miss Fisher's Murder Mysteries]


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[Daredevil, Wilson Fisk/Vanessa Marianna]


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[Overwatch]


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[Mob Psycho 100]


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[Malcolm in the Middle]


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Re: narrative question

(Anonymous) 2016-10-25 12:53 am (UTC)(link)
OP

I was leaning this way, yeah. But it's also not as conventionally linear a narrative as all that. Big gaps in time between scenes. The context the brother tells the friend is extremely significant and can only be achieved without MC around. But it's the wrong voice, arrgh.

Re: narrative question

(Anonymous) 2016-10-25 01:00 am (UTC)(link)
Can't you reveal how important the timing was during the inevitable big blow-up?