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fandomsecrets2016-10-24 06:11 pm
[ SECRET POST #3582 ]
⌈ Secret Post #3582 ⌋
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[Miss Fisher's Murder Mysteries]
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[Daredevil, Wilson Fisk/Vanessa Marianna]
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[Overwatch]
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[Mob Psycho 100]
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[Malcolm in the Middle]
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Re: narrative question
(Anonymous) 2016-10-25 07:42 am (UTC)(link)Basically, in the grand scheme of the story, this is unimportant for plot reasons (as you say, getting together is not that big an obstacle), but years later the boyfriend still finds that scene significant for emotional reasons because the older brother was his mentor and it's the last thing he told him before he moved on.
So I'm torn between something that's better-structured and YES THE FEELS.