[ SECRET POST #3584 ]

[case]

⌈ Secret Post #3584 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

01.



__________________________________________________



02.


__________________________________________________



03.


__________________________________________________



04.


__________________________________________________



05.


__________________________________________________



06.


__________________________________________________



07.


__________________________________________________



08.


__________________________________________________



09.










Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 01 pages, 21 secrets from Secret Submission Post #512.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

Re: Nuuughhh, I've made a huge mistake

[(Anonymous)]

A friend volunteered to beta a fic for me, so I sent it to them. Their general story notes on pacing and whatnot were excellent, but...

I'm pretty sure the editing they did isn't all correct.

Yeah I use a lot of commas. But I'm fairly sure. From what I remember of English class at least. That you can't just replace them with periods.

There's also some pretty big problems where sentences or sentence halves are just gone and the resulting paragraphs don't make sense any more. For example one thing. If it's my fault or if they did it on purpose.

Now I'm torn between going through and fixing everything they fixed because that'll make me examine the text more closely and critically, or saying screw it and just pulling up the older version.