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fandomsecrets2008-05-20 05:35 pm
case) wrote in fandomsecrets2008-05-20 05:35 pm
[ SECRET POST #501 ]
⌈ Secret Post #501 ⌋
Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.
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Notes:
Secrets Left to Post: 11 pages, 266 secrets from Secret Submission Post #072.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 1 - broken links ], [ 1 2 3 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 1 - too big ], [ 1 - seizure inducing ], [ 1 2 3 4 5 - repeat ], [ 1 2 - posted twice ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.
Re: 5
I'd accept that if it came with a neato backstory of how Sylar was brainwashed or was being manipulated like a meat puppet. But then I'd rather read the story of how they brainwashed him than read about him baking cookies. Unless the cookies were full of horror and irony.
Besides, a great writer can usually convey to us which character is which in a fic without saying things like "the geneticist" every other line.
Yeah, when you start having to label his profession, then maybe you just aren't paragraphing very well. Or possibly you are bouncing your POV around too fast. If it's two people in the room, a reader can usually keep them sorted pretty easily by the action and the dialogue, with minimal reminders.
Re: 5
This:
I'd accept that if it came with a neato backstory of how Sylar was brainwashed or was being manipulated like a meat puppet. But then I'd rather read the story of how they brainwashed him than read about him baking cookies. Unless the cookies were full of horror and irony.
made me lol sooo hard.
Horror and Irony cookies FTW.