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(Anonymous) 2017-08-11 02:28 am (UTC)(link)In the meantime, I've been in fandom for a long time now and if I had a dollar for every writer who thought that they couldn't possibly take a suggestion from a beta lest their precious "style" or "voice" is compromised... ooh, I could retire and do nothing but read fanfic forever. And those authors? Yeah, they don't have much worth preserving, to be honest. It's more about protecting their egos than their writing. Constructive feedback from a good beta is one of the most valuable resources any writer has. It might not always be pleasant to hear, but it'll help you grow as a writer.
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(Anonymous) 2017-08-11 06:29 am (UTC)(link)I did creative writing courses in university, and the peer-editing was often LESS helpful than you'd think it would be. Half because you've got twenty different people giving you twenty different opinions on your work, and half because it seemed like everyone was just competing to prove that no, THEY were the best writer in the class.
I feel that "good" is so utterly subjective that you've really just got to take what's useful to you, when it comes to criticism, but not lose sight of the fact that your own tastes and opinions are also valid and important.
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(Anonymous) 2017-08-11 03:30 am (UTC)(link)We also don't know exactly what AYRT means by that. I mean, one form of advice might be: "The way this character goes from calm to sobbing sorrowfully in this scene feels very abrupt and a bit awkward. I think the emotions of the scene would land better if you incorporated his emotional transition a little more smoothly into the text." Is that character input, or something else? To me that feels more like input on the writing itself. As opposed to something like: "I think Character A is coming across too emotive and vulnerable, here especially, but also throughout the rest of the fic. I think the reader may find it hard to believe this is really him, as he's so much more stoic than this in canon." Here we have a piece of input that may well be correct, but if the writer wants Character A to be more emotive and vulnerable in their fic, then being told it's OOC to write him that way isn't going to help them any.
Of course, a really good beta is usually able to identify what the writer's intent is, and do their best to accommodate that (for example, accepting the OOC characterization if it's how the writer wants the character to be, while still smoothing out the writing so that the characterization - however OOC - remains stable, consistent, and relatively believable throughout). That said, a really good beta is - understandably - sometimes hard to find.