[ SECRET POST #3998 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3998 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Comments

Pretend you're writing badfic...

[(Anonymous)]

How would you write/describe your favorite physical characteristics or places?


I would love to write the following, especially if it were a period-era fic(anachronisms galore!):

His cheekbones were like diamond cutting lasers.

Re: Pretend you're writing badfic...

[mandralyne]

His eyes were as blue as the sky on a sunny winter's day.

Re: Pretend you're writing badfic...

[(Anonymous)]

No, no, crystalline blue orbs that burned with fierce intelligence and bold conviction, but still held the promise of gentle tenderness.

Re: Pretend you're writing badfic...

[(Anonymous)]

lmao

I love how perceptive one has to be to glean all that information from just a look, lol "promise of gentle tenderness" ok

Re: Pretend you're writing badfic...

[(Anonymous)]

LOL...I had to look it up, but this reminded me of that scene from Twilight where Bella describes Edward's beauty for like the thousandth time and writes "he looked like he'd just finished shooting a commercial for hair gel". Ooh, how eloquent!

Bonus points for anything that describes both a female character's eyes AND breasts as "orbs".

Re: Pretend you're writing badfic...

[(Anonymous)]

op

lol

fleshy orbs & facial orbs, with a misspelling, so you're not quite sure which is being referred to, as they were both mesmerizing and tempting.