[ SECRET POST #4095 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #4095 ⌋

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

OP, I think you might be on to something. When I look back at my early fan fics, I didn't know how to do technical things like scene breaks and punctuating dialogue. The stories and writing/ideas themselves were just fine. Except for one HUGE problem with one story (using a female character's rape as fodder for the hero's manpain and for her to discover her inner power), I'm not ashamed of anything I've written. I'd still read an enjoy my pieces.

As for my one of embarrassment, well... I just know I don't want to write those tropes anymore. The world might not be better than that, but I am.

[(Anonymous)]

Same. Okay, some of them were dumb teenager-level drama, but the writing and grammar was just fine. They weren't objectively bad, just very clearly written by a teenager.

[(Anonymous)]

What's punctuating dialogue? Welp, something that I *still* don't know...