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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2018-06-27 06:40 pm

[ SECRET POST #4193 ]


⌈ Secret Post #4193 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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[personal profile] feotakahari 2018-06-28 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
If I can understand what the author is saying, I can muddle through the fic. More authors trip over that bar than you’d expect. I’ve seen surprisingly well-regarded fic that can’t structure sentences in such a way that you can understand the concepts without having to rearrange the words like puzzle tiles, e.g. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92460/1/a-hairy-problem/ch1-into-the-forest

(Anonymous) 2018-06-28 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
I thought I understood what you meant by having to rearrange the words to make sense of the text, but I must have more tolerance for it than I believed because I can't notice it at all in the example you used. That fic seems perfectly understandable on a first read to me.