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⌈ Secret Post #4808 ⌋

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[Fights Break Sphere]

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[The Witcher]

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Below, post or paraphrase the best review you've ever received on one of your fics,and a link to that fic!

Okay, so, there are two reviews that I'd say are the best. One quotes a line from my fic and says why the person thinks it works.

" "That he alone could do this to the most powerful being in Arda thrilled him. It filled him with a power that he longed to stoke. He was Mairon, even Melkor could sway to his will."

This was my absolute favorite line from this fic and it perfectly sums up Mairon's character and their dynamic. I love it, and I love this fic. Great job, as always."

That's from Worthy- https://archiveofourown.org/works/7868773?show_comments=true#comments

And then from my newest fic, To Know Your Enemy- https://archiveofourown.org/works/21888862?show_comments=true#comments

"AAAHHHH!!!!! YOU’RE BACK!!!!!! And brilliant as ever, I might add!"

Short and sweet. Nice to know I was appreciated after a long absence due to massive writers block.

Back in the day, I was part of this fanfiction round robin thing where one of us would write a chapter, email it to the group, and then somebody else would write a chapter, and so on. I remember I wrote one chapter and apparently it was so sad that everybody told me that I'd made them cry. I lowkey felt a little proud of that. I think the finished project was posted on GeoCities, so it's probably been long deleted.

ngl but I adore every single one of my reviews, but some of my fav. are:

Seeking Rin:

"Whooooooa. Very Manchurian candidate. So intriguing! Thi all just turned epic! Reading on!"

"... What
The.
FUCK is going on here?"

"I can't believe I found a Dean Koontz novel here of all places, hahaha. I like your writing style. Keep it up author-san :)"

And from a vaguely more recently updated fic comes this lengthy review:

Are You Ready? :

"Oh wow. I love this so much! I agree with Hatake (I'll use that to differ between him and regular Kakashi). The training for, at least, the Rookie 9 (we can partially take Gai's team because of favoritism (he totally has it)) was seriously lacking. Kakashi literally taught them water-walking, which can even be construed as just going "Do this." One can argue about team-building, and trying to focus on Sasuke to keep him in village, but to me those are sorely lacking excuses. (I have feelings on little Sasuke and his level of threat to the village with his hostility and inability for teamwork, but that is neither here or there.)

I love how this is expanding on Kakashi's inability to teach Genin (love the guy, one of my favorite characters, but he was a horrendously terrible teacher), and how younger him views this. I absolutely adore Hatake's viewpoint as we get to read his feelings on his other self. I kind of want to see both of them face-to-face just to witness the verbal, at least, asskicking for being such a horrible sensei.

I adore how this is expanding on Sakura's feelings on this, which are glossed over in the anime, if that. Her feelings are conveyed very well, and written pretty damn well, to put it very simple. I am in love with her views, which I can totally get. I love how her insecurities also play. I love how Hatake can see this and adapt. I can create a treasure hoard for the amount of feels I have just to have Ino backing her. Ino helping teach her things. I have seriously affection for how this touches on how Tsunade can teach her, but she can't heal all of her emotions that were trampled when she first became a Genin.

I have to say, my favorite part in this, so far as I am sure I have much to look forward to, is how Sakura and Ino are being reassured that it is not their fault. It is not them that has failed. The system has failed them, their teachers has failed them. In the anime, I would not have been surprised if Rookie 9 had been killed in missions due to being unprepared for everything. Just look at Wave for that. (Just imagine Hatake's views on that clusterfuck).

While I adore close relationships between mentor and student, I love the opposite as well. It gives depth to those relations. It just so happens thay this gives me both, which i am extremely grateful for. I am so happy with this. So very joyous. Thank you so much for writing this. I know this is mainly me complaining about the anime, but this piece of literature gives me what I am seriously so happy for. Thank you.

Thank you so much for writing this, and sharing it for us to enjoy! While I would adore to read more, take care of yourself! For however long it takes for anything, i will always be lurking to enjoy more! Take care of yourself, and do not push yourself!
Thank you so much for this piece of greatness."

someone told me they were printing out my fic and putting it on their wall

this was like 20 years ago

oh god it was 20 years ago

One of the most memorably worded reviews I ever got was:

"MY LOVE FOR YOUR GABRIEL BURNS LIKE MARY WINCHESTER ON A CEILING"

But I don't remember what specific fic it was! I wrote a lot of SPN Gabriel one shots, but it might have been left on something in The Banter'verse.

RA

XD what a fucking visual

That has to be the best review ever...

Both these reviews were left in a semi-private capacity, rather than ON the fic, but I'll still count them. Both for "white as tar against your berylline heart". (https://archiveofourown.org/works/22507594/chapters/53782984)

Longer: "You have a gift for horror or horror adjacent writing. I didn't know much about [the fandom] going in, which possibly added to the air of mystery I can't really say, but I really liked the way it unfolded, gradually becoming clearer and clearer what is going on and how disturbed the protagonist is [... ...] that was absolutely brilliantly written. Disturbing, in some respects, and perhaps not something I would re-read incessantly for that reason alone, but very well done all the same."

Shorter: "it's beautifully written
Dude I loved it a lot
It was like
dripping in art"

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