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fandomsecrets2008-11-17 04:29 pm
[ SECRET POST #682 ]
⌈ Secret Post #682 ⌋
Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.
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(Anonymous) 2008-11-17 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)106: Hey, don't worry: It'll never come up.
107: This is the exact opposite of a secret. "Here's why I watched a TV show: Something unremarkable."
113: Obvious troll is retarded. Or twelve. Or a retarded twelve year old.
125: Green font on a green background? Nice choice!
129: Black font on a dark background? Even better choice!
131: Next stop: Watch all shows whose executive producer is Jewish.
137: Eyestraining color choices, giant wall of text, completely uninteresting secret? We have a winner!
144: I take it you found the scene awkward enough to render it invisible. Nice!
145: You know what makes me see posters as pitiful and weak? Spelling "pitiful" as "pityful", and "lose" as "loose."
--AJ
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(Anonymous) 2008-11-17 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)no subject
(Anonymous) 2008-11-17 10:38 pm (UTC)(link)But hey, if you don't like criticism of nothing but your spelling, here's some more:
In the first paragraph, you went from "he or she" to "him/her". You probably should have gone with "him or her," but if you really want the other form, use it throughout.
In the second paragraph, "him/her's adventures" isn't how you want to say that. You wouldn't say him (or him's) adventures, and you really shouldn't say her's adventures. If you insist on the slash, it's "his/her adventures", if you don't want to do that, his or her adventures. In general, you can use "their" for the singular when you don't know gender, which would make a lot of this easier.
In the third paragraph, you've got "a time where people". You want to have, "a time when people".
Did you see what I did there? I "attacked" your grammar, rather than your spelling. Well, I guess I attacked your spelling a bit, as "her's" isn't a word. But I didn't only mock your spelling.
--AJ
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(Anonymous) 2008-11-18 01:21 am (UTC)(link)Re: OP 144
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(Anonymous) 2008-11-19 05:45 am (UTC)(link)By the way, would it kill you to find something positive to say about anything? Damn.