[ SECRET POST #4862 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #4862 ⌋

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Notes:

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Comments

Re: Secrets you're too lazy to make

[(Anonymous)]

I really hate excessive dialogue in smut fic, I don't feel like anyone actually does 'dirty talk' well and I always find it so awkward and cringey.

Re: Secrets you're too lazy to make

[(Anonymous)]

hmmm...I feel like being able to write the "right" kind of dirty talk (everyone has personal tastes I'll assume) is really hard and take skill!

I've read some that works for me and others that make me roll my eyes and stop reading the fic entirely...when it's done right the effect can be amazing. Otherwise it is awful and take me completely out of it. Awkward and cringey as you put it.

Re: Secrets you're too lazy to make

[(Anonymous)]

Seconding this. Good dirty talk can make smut so much hotter. Almost all my favorite smut has some dirty talk in it. But there's also a strong degree of "know your audience" involved as well (unless you don't care whether anyone but you enjoy it, which is also fine).

Like, personally, I'm all about descriptions of how it feels, praise, asking the other to tell them how it feels, and exclamations of pleasure. OTOH, I hate degrading talk, and I hate when the characters call each other things I don't vibe with (like "daddy" and "baby boy" for example).

So if you know your audience is mainly somewhat more vanilla people, like me, then you may want to avoid squicking them by putting stuff like "daddy" and "little cockslut" in your fic.

OTOH, if you know your audience is primarily the daddy-kink crowd, or the bdsm kinksters or whathaveyou, then you might want to lean hard into that stuff.

Re: Secrets you're too lazy to make

[(Anonymous)]

DA

This. And of course, it also depends on what the characters in question would be likely to say to each other as well (which, admittedly, can sometimes be tough because people can be very different in the bedroom from how they behave in other aspects of their daily life).