[ SECRET POST #4932 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #4932 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Writing question (s)

[(Anonymous)]

I don't know if I'm good but I'm certainly better than I was. Lol.

I tried out a few things in a draft, left it for a bit and then came back and read it. I decided I hated how mechanical some of it was and really didn't need to narrate people undressing from start to finish, or try to come up with an sexy word to describe the peen. I could just describe character A feeling B's erection when they were kissing and then skip over the awkward bits to get to the fucking.

It helps me stay in one person's head during the act so I describe how the B person looks and reacts or how whatever they're doing makes the A feel. I tend to write pretty emotional sex scenes so there's usually some plot tension building beforehand and the characters are in a heightened state of emotion. Maybe it's not as descriptive or porny as some people write, I don't discuss positions much except to say that A pressed B's hands against the headboard or B looked up at A with whatever expression. I think it flows a bit better that way.

It's all personal preference though. Go back and read scenes you've enjoyed and pick them apart for ideas.

Re: Writing question (s)

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SA
I can't grammar today apparently. I shouldn't try when I take phenergan. fenergen? Phenergen? One of them.

Re: Writing question (s)

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nayrt

this along with the others' comments of "emulate what you like reading" I think I pretty good. Especially the write, come back to it, etc. For me the build up of the scene is important too (at least for what Iw rite --every situation is different). Granted, I haven't posted what I've written, but I do like to revise it, see how I feel about it, how descriptive and of what, and how much emotion do I want to convey, etc.