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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2020-10-10 03:29 pm

[ SECRET POST #5027 ]


⌈ Secret Post #5027 ⌋

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[personal profile] sparklywalls 2020-10-10 08:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Agree with other comments that this is just terrible writing.

It's ok to write about attractive people and being attracted to them but I feel if you reach the point where it feels like you're describing them mostly as a disembodied body part or food...you maybe need to reconsider how you express yourself in a piece of writing that is presumably not meant for just your personal wank bank. Even worse if you go on about it in that manner for way more than a sentence. And yes as a woman attracted to men, I'd apply the same standard to myself.