[ SECRET POST #5044 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5044 ⌋

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 02 pages, 31 secrets from Secret Submission Post #722.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I mean... that's a noble offer, but if OP offers to beta with the goal of helping their friend improve, at some point they're going to have to point out the flaws. Sounds like they don't want to do that.

[(Anonymous)]

Pointing out flaws in the context of beta reading is a different thing. It's expected that a beta reader will point out flaws and help you improve your fic. It doesn't mean your fic is bad, just that it could be better.

If OP doesn't want to do that, that's totally fine. I'm just saying that if they're going to point out flaws in their friend's work, the way to do it kindly is by doing it in a constructive and invited capacity. Merely telling their friend their work is unreadably bad accomplishes nothing but making their friend feel bad.