[ SECRET POST #5177 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5177 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.


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02.
[Persona 5 Strikers]


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03.
[Death in Paradise]


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04.
[Carpool Karaoke with Prince Harry]


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05.
[DC Comics]


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06.
[Death Note the Musical]


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07.
[FFXV]


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08.
[Drifters]


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09.
[Sherlock Holmes]


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10.
[Taskmaster]


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11.
[Yu-Gi-Oh! ZEXAL]















Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 02 pages, 35 secrets from Secret Submission Post #741.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

Re: Weird Smut Vocab

[(Anonymous)]

The only thing that's a huge no for me is blatant euphemisms.

Also, this isn't a word so much as a weak-writing quirk, but when we start getting porny descriptions of the POV character that inexplicably break out of close third, I back-click immediately. If you're writing in close third, and your POV character goes to masturbate, and we get a description of his "tight little hole" I am out of there. You can go, "He shivered as he worked his finger in deeper. God, he was tight. It'd been way too long since he'd done this," because that is something a person might feasibly think while fingering themself. But if you go, "He pressed his face into the pillow, smothering a whine as two fingers filled his tight little hole," I just cannot, because you've broken close third for the sake of horniness, and now we don't have a POV. We're not in your POV character, but we're also not not in your POV character. We are in narrative purgatory.