[ SECRET POST #5216 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5216 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.


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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 02 pages, 48 secrets from Secret Submission Post #747.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

Re: Kissing Scenes (inspired be Secret #2)

[(Anonymous)]

I commented on the actual secret, but gonna agree with everyone here -- focusing on feeling and sensation. Where are the hands? Can the character feel the heat of the other character's body? What is the emotion and feeling swelling within them? Is it tearing them apart slowly? Is it building, building and they can't keep their hands of the other person?

These kinds of description can really help build and set the mood, imo.