[ SECRET POST #5333 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5333 ⌋

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 01 pages, 06 secrets from Secret Submission Post #763.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Not the secret maker but I thought the ExR translation was an unreadable mess in the sense of "this is so clunky that it's emotionally painful to read" not "this is literally incoherent and I can't understand what it's saying".

Not technically unreadable in that I did actually read it all, and I'm very grateful it was available because it was still easier than sitting through a whole ass TV show for me personally, but a slightly hyberbolic interpretation of "unreadable mess" seems perfectly reasonable to me. Especially if, like me, OP has a strong enough internal editor to be bothered by that kind of awkward flow that's endemic to mediocre translation.

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[(Anonymous)]

Yeah, you hit it exactly. When I read fiction for fun I don't want to feel like I'm their beta reader scribbling notes in the margins. Professional editing is worth twice that cover price.