[ SECRET POST #5502 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5502 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.


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[Scum Villain's Self Saving System]



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03. [SPOILERS for Final Fantasy XIV: Endwalker]



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04. [SPOILERS for Doctor Who: Eve of the Daleks]




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05. [SPOILERS for Sword and Brocade]




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06. [SPOILERS for Spider-Man: No Way Home]




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07. [WARNING for discussion of sexual harassment]




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08. [WARNING for discussion of sexual assault/non-con]
























Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 00 pages, 00 secrets from Secret Submission Post #787.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

Re: Writer Thread

[(Anonymous)]

I have the scene started with A and B eating breakfast and talking about their favorite songs. A song that A likes comes on the radio and he wants to dance with B, but is a little embarrassed to say it. That’s the part I’m getting stuck on because everything I write for A in this scene sounds either OOC or just plain dumb. Maybe I’m thinking too hard about it and am stuck trying to get it perfect.

Re: Writer Thread

[ofc_nonny]

First, that sounds like such a sweet scene! I'm such a sucker for fluff.

Second, I think that you should let him say the OOC/dumb thing and keep the scene going. You can always go back and fixate on improving it/changing it later, but hopefully, you will be able to complete the scene. That will be a move forward with your fic! You might be able to find a way change/add to the part where A is trying to find the courage to dance with B after you complete the scene.
I could have sworn I saw this sentiment on here before but it'll be easier to fix/alter/edit with something you have written rather than a blank sheet of paper.

Best wishes and good luck with writing this scene!

Re: Writer Thread

[(Anonymous)]

Thanks for the advice! I’m gonna try and leave the dumb thing A says as is and do my best to go from there (and maybe shrink the font so I can’t reread it lol).