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⌈ Secret Post #5678 ⌋

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Re: Late writing question

[(Anonymous)]

Depends on the writer's style. I generally prefer in media res, that gets some introductory points here and there, especially if we're in the character's head from the start.

I.e.
Night had fallen, and the man in black paced the rooftop, waiting. He shouldn't have taken this job. He knew he shouldn't have, but there he was, ensnared by the look in the Empress' eyes and the promise of more money he could imagine. Just this one last job, and that was it. That's also what he said last time, but here he was again.

The wind picked up...


Not claiming this is the best example, but I don't mind that. Nor do I mind a Jane Austen style "it is well know that a man in...." Intro either. It just depends on the tone if the story and the style of the writer.