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⌈ Secret Post #5853 ⌋

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

ayrt

I think romantic is where it is headed as well.

Okay, don't get me wrong, the prose was fine. Like, it just felt very strange to have all these different things and "alien romance" with it? That made it confusing in... a genre expectations kind of way. I wouldn't know how to 'sell' it to a reader and would always have to ask "do you like alien romance?" That's just me, I guess. Over analyzing.

[(Anonymous)]

The prose isn't even "fine," though, it's pretty clunky and tedious in a lot of places. Like, embarrassingly so.

It did seem to be heading to romance, I agree, but then I think I've heard that there's a human love interest in the sequel so who knows.

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(ayrt)

I have read a lot worse. So when I say fine, it's "It didn't make me bash my head against a wall."

But yes it was very tedious in some places.

Interesting about the human love interest. I wasn't going to read the sequel, so I'll have to find a summary somewhere. She's contracted for 3 books I think.