[ SECRET POST #5853 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5853 ⌋

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

The prose isn't even "fine," though, it's pretty clunky and tedious in a lot of places. Like, embarrassingly so.

It did seem to be heading to romance, I agree, but then I think I've heard that there's a human love interest in the sequel so who knows.

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(ayrt)

I have read a lot worse. So when I say fine, it's "It didn't make me bash my head against a wall."

But yes it was very tedious in some places.

Interesting about the human love interest. I wasn't going to read the sequel, so I'll have to find a summary somewhere. She's contracted for 3 books I think.