[ SECRET POST #5951 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5951 ⌋

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[(Anonymous)]

AYRT

For me, in a 1st person story (at least any moderately well-executed one) I don't put myself in the shoes of the protagonist; I'm still observing the scene, I just am observing it from a vantage point that also gives me access to what's going on in a character's skull

[(Anonymous)]

Omniscient third person works better.

[(Anonymous)]

It depends on the style and the setup and the story, neither's really better than the other.