[ SECRET POST #5993 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5993 ⌋

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Comments

AYRT

[(Anonymous)]

I mean yeah true maybe I could tweak it. But the idea was more describing a situation she was in as the story starts.

Looking back the summary was flawed but... that reason just struck me as odd, because the description I did give was all.. well problems. Not "Special snowflake who's better than anyone" but more "walking source of mischief and trouble" I was sorta going for a vibe like a girl version of Percy Jackson from PJO, often in trouble and having a hard time in school because of it.

SA , Addition

[(Anonymous)]

I guess my issue and frustration was just.. how do you avoid describing a main character in some way as ... idk different or standing out . They're a main character. But I don't know maybe I'm wrong.

Re: SA , Addition

[(Anonymous)]

DA

I think the answer to this is to not describe the main character at all. What is the story about? Not on a technical level, Person A does thing B, but in general. Is it about grief? Love? Perseverance? Or alternatively, what do you want the audience to feel when they read it? Should it be humorous? Comforting? Will they feel despair?

These are the things your summary should be geared towards. What kind of experience is your reader in for?

AYRT

[(Anonymous)]

Huh that does make sense
Thanks!

Sorry for the dumb complaint.