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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2023-06-26 06:15 pm

[ SECRET POST #6016 ]


⌈ Secret Post #6016 ⌋

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[personal profile] feotakahari 2023-06-26 11:29 pm (UTC)(link)
I think “not being shit” is enough of a sign on its own.

(Anonymous) 2023-06-26 11:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Me writing smut has made for some *eye-opening* wiki-walks on various sex advice sites...

(Anonymous) 2023-06-26 11:47 pm (UTC)(link)
As a sex-haver and sex-writer, "Now where are their hands?!" is just an eternal mood. I danced for a long time, and trying to write a sex scene is like trying to choreograph a routine. XD
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[personal profile] pantswarrior 2023-06-27 12:32 am (UTC)(link)
...I both like (stick it to the AI bots and prove human creativity) and don't like (dangit you're probably right that it'll get harder to prove a human wrote something) the way you think.

I mean when I first started reading the last bit, I thought it was going to go into "aw shucks, since AI won't generate porn for me I will have to write it myself" territory and I am so relieved to be wrong.

(Anonymous) 2023-06-27 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
If I'm understanding right, you're asking for input on writing the emotional/intimacy side of sex?

(Anonymous) 2023-06-27 06:02 am (UTC)(link)
Comment but not secret OP here and I'm not asking for input at all, I figure writing the non-physical aspects of sex is like writing the non-physical aspects of anything.

The emotions might actually be easier than the other non-physical bits, because I figure most people who have/like/want sex probably manage to fit the full gamut of human emotions into having sex, and I can extrapolate from how I write a character generally to how I write them in bed.

I'm just at a disadvantage because a) no personal experience and b) it's like practicing anything; I've written lots in general but hardly any sex scenes, so my first attempts are gonna kind of suck, if not outright blow (pun not intended.)

(Anonymous) 2023-06-27 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
Fade-to-black is always your friend.

Write as much as is comfortable for you for that particular scene and then do the equivalent of cutting to a fire burning in a hearth or a surging ocean or, you know.

Works for me!

(Anonymous) 2023-06-27 03:22 pm (UTC)(link)
AYRT--oh, I don't want to write to my comfort zone in this case. I want to write in a "clearly this person wrote this one-handed," "hey OP, jsyk, I came" way. Because fuck AI, and not in a sexbot or Chuck Tingle kind of way.

Idk if chatbots can even extrude fade to black sex scenes, but if they can, all the more reason to break out the purple (and, indeed, pink and flushed and throbbing) prose. I don't even post my fanfic much of anywhere, and the few times I have it's been on anon.

But I just fucking loathe the idea of machine-learning taking over the fun creative parts of being human and leaving only the drudgery. Blech.

(Anonymous) 2023-06-27 06:02 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for turning my comment into a secret, OP!