[ SECRET POST #6096 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #6096 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.


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Notes:

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Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I think well done dialogue can be great, but that's a challenge sometimes. It's just SO easy to mess up. My least favorite kind of smut dialogue is where writers spell out what, IMO, ought to be just "she moaned" and instead go:

"AhhhhhhhhmygodAHHHHHHHyeahAHHHHHHH," screamed Scully.
"Hunnnurrrrrrrghhhhuuuuuuuh," moaned Mulder.

That shit is the worst, LOL.

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NAYRT

XD The way I wrote smut when I was a teen and I thought I was being so daring writing out sex moans