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(Anonymous) 2023-11-18 04:23 am (UTC)(link)Fargath put on his gharkazis and borkborks and climbed down the ziggatarin to the old gubnits where he raised a glak of kavva to his lips and took a deep drink. "Ahhh," thought Fargath, "There's nothing like a good glak of kavva to start the day. Where's my krajj? Maybe Vixalla knows where it is."
They don't do that. What they do is write a normal story using mostly recognizable earth names for things and sprinkle in a few made up words for local color.
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Which doesn't seem to be what the OP is talking about. Which isn't what I said at all, and you know it, but seem to want to make a rather silly and totally out-there example as somehow the norm.
CJ Cherryh is an award winning author. Try reading her 'Foreigner' series. Amazingly - there are made up words! And it's still 100% readable!
Also, have you ever read 'A Clockwork Orange'?
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(Anonymous) 2023-11-18 06:01 am (UTC)(link)It's also oftlen better for the flow of the prose to use familiar words unless it's important that something is unique to the setting. Just like a fantasy world might have quillotines despite having never had Joseph-Ignace Guillotin. Unless you're making a Pratchettian joke about it, there's no point in stopping the execution scene cold to explain that it's named after the elven inventor quil-yoten, or alternatively called the ghizinbak, meaning "beheader" in dwarvish.
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(Anonymous) 2023-11-18 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)Unless it's relevant to the plot, you don't make up alien words for everything. Not because it "doesn't make sense for aliens to use human words" because it doesn't. It's because the story is written for humans and if you make your story hard to get through PEOPLE AREN'T GOING TO READ IT. Unless the bamboo-adjacent thing has a special property that is a checkov's gun? Just call it fucking bamboo.
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Lots of reasons also to *not* call a duck a duck.