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[ SECRET POST #6381 ]
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Kinda based on 3
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(Anonymous) 2024-06-26 10:11 am (UTC)(link)First person used to be way more common in kids and YA and rarer in adult books. It seems to be the default in a lot of adult books now.
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(Anonymous) 2024-06-26 01:51 am (UTC)(link)Sorry guys but I came into expecting A/B, not A/B/C. If I knew the ultimate goal was A/B/C I would have gladly passed on it and not been annoyed.
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(Anonymous) 2024-06-26 02:03 am (UTC)(link)"Posting from my phone while sitting on the tarmac waiting for my plane to take off! Sorry for typos!"
"Wrote this at 3 a.m. while high on cold medicine, might edit later."
If it wasn't worth your time to give it a basic proofread for quality control, it ain't worth my time to read.
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(Anonymous) 2024-06-26 10:28 am (UTC)(link)Just this.
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(Anonymous) 2024-06-26 02:52 am (UTC)(link)"What if Scene A went a different way?
What if Person B had made a different choice?
What if Person C recognized their feelings sooner?
What if all of it could have been avoided?
What new problems will they face?"
You get ONE conceit. If you're just gonna change everything about how characters react in canon then it's gonna have shit characterization.
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(Anonymous) 2024-06-26 03:18 am (UTC)(link)Oh.
But.
Damn.
There are plenty of other ways to adequately depict how a character is feeling and/or build tension. Please do not resort to lazy writing (and I cannot understand how readers sit there and go oooh this author is such a good writer)
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Just ....shut up please. Nobody cares
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