[ SECRET POST #1264 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #1264 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 27 pages, 651 secrets from Secret Submission Post #181.
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Comments

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I assume what they've written is technically well done (grammar) and maybe tending towards elegant language, but ultimately is kind of boring. Maybe the pace is too slow for the readers to slog all the way through. Maybe because it's making much to do out of something really trivial. Or it's tackling a subject that has been tackled in a similar way by dozens of others -- maybe not quite as elegantly, but still closely enough that the story just doesn't seem fresh or exciting. Or it doesn't sell situation as being worth the time and effort to read. Or it's preachy or pretentious. Or the characters come off as being unattractive and unpleasant.

The result is the same: A technically excellently written story that follows all the rules of literature and should have hit the ball out of the park, yet falls flat. Meanwhile the person who wrote mindless, poorly executed (but extremely fun to read) crap keeps raking in the comments. Because despite the fact that it doesn't have all the things it should to be literature, it's got spark and spunk and it lights people's imaginations on fire.