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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2010-07-27 04:31 pm

[ SECRET POST #1302 ]


⌈ Secret Post #1302 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Secrets Left to Post: 11 pages, 255 secrets from Secret Submission Post #186.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 1 2 3 - not!secrets ], [ 1 2 3 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
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[identity profile] velvet-mace.livejournal.com 2010-07-28 06:58 am (UTC)(link)
This isn't what you want to hear, but I think you are right. You are doing something wrong.

This isn't really about this person who you don't read, it's about you being disappointed with yourself. This is about you discovering that the rules for writing that you've been told should work don't match reality. And I'll tell you from experience, it's hard to learn that you got things wrong.

Without seeing your fic, I'd say there's a 90 percent chance the reason why you aren't getting the interest in your fic that you think you should is because what you've written lacks pizzazz. It's not hooking people's emotions. It could be highly realistic, and highly nuanced, but if it's also boring, then it's not going to garner the interest the effort you put in deserves.

Look through what you are writing -- forget for a moment the wording, the ICness, the realism, and ask yourself is this story really something fresh and new, or is it a very well thought through, clever retelling of what everyone already knows.

(Anonymous) 2010-07-28 01:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Ok, so I suck.
I'll stop trying.
Thanks.

[identity profile] velvet-mace.livejournal.com 2010-07-28 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)
If that's the message you got out of what I just wrote, then you really aren't ready to improve. If you want to be more popular like the people you envy, then come back, read again, and see the direction I just pointed you in. Hooking people's emotions is a skill that can be worked on, but not if it's a factor that is being totally ignored.

Frankly, I found my dispair level highest when I thought I was doing everything I could and still fell flat. Finding a new direction to work on (once I got over the "ouch" factor) filled me with excitement, renewed determination, and hope.
Edited 2010-07-28 17:20 (UTC)

(Anonymous) 2010-07-28 05:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. You should be glad your story isn't getting much attention if you're this sensitive to criticism.