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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2011-09-18 04:10 pm

[ SECRET POST #1720 ]

⌈ Secret Post #1720 ⌋


Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.


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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 09 pages, 211 secrets from Secret Submission Post #246.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 1 - broken links ], [ 1 2 3 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 1 2 3 - too big ], [ 1 - take it to comments ], [ 1 - repeats ]
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments and concerns should go here.

(Anonymous) 2011-09-19 03:57 am (UTC)(link)
This. All stated could have been written very well but instead they were executed poorly. If the reader comes to the part where Neville recaps what happened and would have rather heard that story, then you executed your main story badly.

It's even worse on film. Nobody wants to watch a camping trip where people bricker and read newspapers. You know, they could have down what they did in Two Towers. Splice the boring golden trio camping bits with the building up of the final battle. It would have added more to the story and to the secondary characters.

[identity profile] marshwiggledyke.livejournal.com 2011-09-19 04:59 am (UTC)(link)
THIS IS A GOOD PLOT FIX AND SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED.