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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2012-04-15 03:46 pm

[ SECRET POST #1930 ]


⌈ Secret Post #1930 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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(Anonymous) 2012-04-15 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
No bad porn, you say.

'"Please, mister," she gasped, "don't do this!" But it was too late. Her surprised scream filled the air as he spread her downstairs carpet forcefully with his hands, before making her sit on his warm cucumber. He then started pumping her, making her squeal in a strange mixture of pain and pleasure. Just as she thought the terrible ordeal was over and done with, the man grinned in a cruel manner. Before she could say anything, his supernaturally strong arms lifted her butt and thighs.
He then spun her around, so that her back was touching his hairy chest, and started fingering her clit. And rub it he did, like a mad DJ does a record. Up and down she went on his magnificent pole, squish squish, with the slippery and wet sounds increasing with the slowly quickening rhythm.
At this point the hot babe with the perky, round DDD-cup breasts didn't even know if her own cries were that of delight or shame. She must have lost her mind at some point, for soon she heard her own words leave her mouth; faster! Harder!
"Oh yes!" Squish. "Ohhh!" Slurp.


For the record, I don't normally do f/m porn. I haven't the faintest idea why. But like, if a "bad" fic isn't cheesy, it's usually full of grammatical mistakes and really rushed writing. I agree the hotness of porn is highly subjective, since that's the whole idea behind 'your kink is not my kink', but I really think it comes down to how it's executed. So, yeah, IMO poorly written porn exists. It's more about the writing than the porn itself.

(Anonymous) 2012-04-16 05:30 am (UTC)(link)
NAYRT, but that porn is fucking hilarious to me. So...still not bad. XD

(Anonymous) 2012-04-16 04:13 pm (UTC)(link)
sa

lol thank you

[identity profile] marshwiggledyke.livejournal.com 2012-04-16 05:43 am (UTC)(link)
oh my god the DJ metaphor.

(Anonymous) 2012-04-16 04:14 pm (UTC)(link)
sa

Thank you, I guess? :D

[identity profile] al28894.livejournal.com 2012-04-16 10:16 am (UTC)(link)
HAHAHAHA!!! That's the most cheesiest piece of fanfiction written on the fly!

(By the way, I apologize for my bad English. I'm feeling a bit sleepy here...)

(Anonymous) 2012-04-16 04:16 pm (UTC)(link)
sa

Thank you~ English isn't my first language either.