[ SECRET POST #2056 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2056 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 05 pages, 110 secrets from Secret Submission Post #294.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 1 - broken links ], [ 1 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 1 2 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ], [ 1 - titc ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

...That is some phenomenally shitty art, even by yaoi webcomic standards.

[(Anonymous)]

*shrugs* to each and their own.

[(Anonymous)]

I guess. I'm just amazed at how an artist with no working knowledge whatsoever of even the most basic shit like anatomy and proportion can get this kind of following.

[(Anonymous)]

It seems like a lack of knowledge of proportions and anatomy isn't exactly uncommon in yaoi...

Observe: http://letmefixthatyaoiforyou.tumblr.com/

[altumcor]

Looks fine and decent to me. It's not "phenomenally shitty" as I've seen a lot of drawings that are worse. Cain's calf muscles's could stand to be a bit thicker in proportion to his thighs. His legs need to be more tight around Abel's waist, since they seem to be in the air without much support. But it's not bad. The facial expressions convey what they need to and the hands and feet are nicely drawn in my opinion.

Ease up on the hate, anon.

[(Anonymous)]

Sorry, but IMO it's pretty shitty art. The black-haired guy's right arm (the one behind his torso) looks broken because it's bent back way too far. The light-haired guy's arms (especially his wrist) look like they're going to to snap off because they're way too skinny in proportion to his torso. Torsos are both way too long in proportion to the legs. Black-haired guy's hidden leg looks dislocated because it's way longer than the other leg. Light-haired guy has no hip bones, either. It looks to me like this person has never even seen a naked man before, nevermind two of them having sex, and thus has no idea how the body is even put together.

[(Anonymous)]

I think you might enjoy this blog and getting angry at the art in it:

http://wtfyaoianatomy.tumblr.com/

[(Anonymous)]

Oh my god, that link is glorious. Yet another funny to add to my dash! Thanks, 'non!

[altumcor]

Fair enough, I see it your way, but a few counterpoints. Cain's right arm, I can see, and his right leg, I kind of get, but I chalk it up to foreshortening. His right lower leg is I admit rather awkward. I have to disagree with your thought on Abel/Blonde's figure as my life drawing class's model has that kind of physique- short arm span, long midsection, wiry frame- the skinny wrists included, so I just assumed he was lanky. And Cain's torso is fine as it is and I disagree that it's too long. Although now I could see there could've been some improvements with the neck and collar bone.

I just still stand by that I've seen a lot worse i.e.: that tumblr blog posted above.

[(Anonymous)]

Cain's right arm, I can see, and his right leg, I kind of get, but I chalk it up to foreshortening.

But that isn't foreshortening. At all. His right leg isn't facing the viewer. There's very little, if any, foreshortening going on in this image.

There's also a huge difference between "lanky" and "that body looks like it would fall apart at the joints in a strong wind." This is an example of the latter.