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fandomsecrets2012-12-24 09:42 pm
case) wrote in fandomsecrets2012-12-24 09:42 pm
[ SECRET POST #2183 ]
⌈ Secret Post #2183 ⌋
Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.
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Notes:
Sorry for late, overslept.
Secrets Left to Post: 03 pages, 067 secrets from Secret Submission Post #312.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 1 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.
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'Even the author' should probably be 'either the author' in that context.
You can take out the 'a' in 'a suggestions' in the last bit, too.
I'm actually surprised no one has done this yet. You seem like you would like concrit for your secret-making experience, so I'm a little shocked that no one has done this yet.
Anyway, the secret's nice and readable, good text size, not too much, doesn't clash with the background. Minor grammar errors only. I think you're pretty good at this, just needs a little proofreading next time!
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